I'm making a website to replace my landing page on Instagram..

I'm making a website to replace my landing page on Instagram and am hoping someone might want to offer some input. Atm, my landing page is just a link to OF and nothing else. I figure it'd be nice to share more of my story, but also don't want to push people away or say too much. 3-4 sentences would be ideal, but given who I am, I ended up with 4 long paragraphs.... "My Story...    In February of 2021, I posted a selfie on Reddit. I'd never posted before & didn't have any other social media, but I'd just gotten a haircut and was feeling pretty darn cute. I had NO choice but to share... lol. I didn't know it yet, but I was in the midst of a bipolar manic episode. Excessive confidence, out of character behavior, & impulsive decisions are all textbook symptoms of mania. It's weird... no matter how many episodes I have (and I've had a LOT), I never believe I'm manic when it's happening. It just feels like any idea I have is the best idea ever and I become fully convinced that something I thought of 5 minutes ago is going to change my life in some way. Until this point, that meant spontaneous trips, fully investing in random hobbies, and being more confident & social than usual. My bank account almost always took a hit, but nothing too life changing. That is, until I posted my selfie. As soon as I posted it, I began receiving DMs from men asking if I had an OnlyFans (aka OF). That's when I realized that I'd posted in a subreddit that was primarily just girls promoting their OF accounts.    I knew almost nothing about OF, but knew I wasn't interested.  I was a full time nanny getting ready to return to school the next semester and I was raised to believe that sex work is trash. I had all the classic sex work stereotypes deeply engrained in my head. Plus, my life was pretty good and I had no reason to do it. Still though, I was intrigued & flattered by all the attention and so I continued posting. One thing led to the next, and within a week, I had an OF account. It's all a bit of a blur now, but a quick summary is that I realized I could make enough to pay rent and that was pretty tempting for someone who was broke and living with her parents. The nudes part was out of my realms, but I've always been a highly sexual person and didn't really see a problem with it. My thought was that I could do it for a few months, never tell anyone, then move on... no big deal. But my 3rd month in, my page exploded. I made more than my yearly nanny salary that month and decided it would be dumb not to ride the wave.    For many reasons, riding the wave was harder than I expected. For one, I'm a virgin. I figured I could hide that since it wasn't longterm, but when I decided to give OF a real chance, I realized it was unrealistic to keep this to myself. I had too many boundaries that I wasn't willing to break. The other struggle was dealing with how the world views sex work. I'd always gotten along with everyone I talk to and never received any hate, so I was completely unprepared for the shift in how most of the world views me. It took me a good 2 years to rid myself of the shame and start caring more about what makes me happy than about what others think of me.    As painful as much of this experience has been, I'm really proud of how I've handled it and how things are turning out. My page is so personal and special to me and I actually love being an "OF girl". Mostly because I'm not... really. Sure, I use the platform and post some of the hottest nudes ever ;) but I also stick to my own boundaries, only post when I'm in a good headspace, and am my truest self on there. It's made me so confident in who I am and I'm so thankful for the whole experience. It's exactly what I needed. Plus I get to make hundreds of people cum everyday and that's kinda super hot. Hahaha...." I guess I'm looking for constructive criticism. If someone wants to condense this for me I'd prob fall in love lmao or even just tell me if this would deter you from my page if you read this before subscribing. Or ideas for something else I should mention? I mean my stories not exactly "hot". Okay... thank you thank you THANK YOU. I hope you're having a great day :)